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My super heros are my parents!! When they were not here, i can’t do anything!! Other heros are the medical staffs!! They always treat as fast as they can. They are heros in these days.
강사 첨삭
They surely are!!
My super heros are my parents!!
>> My super heroes are my parents!!
When they were not here, i can’t do anything!!
>> If they were not here, I can’t do anything!!
Other heros are the medical staffs!!
>> Other heroes for me are medical staff!!
They always treat as fast as they can.
>> They always treat people as fast as they can.
They are heros in these days.
>> They are the heroes these days.
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