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Long time ago, people would be seen the star and at the same time, they think about why is the star\'s shape different.
I think that horoscopes are made from people\'s curiosity and to fear about uncertain future.
When I feel nervous about being my situation, I also go to take horoscpes.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I think it would be good if you familiarize yourself with different expressions.
There are many involving prepositions.
It would help a lot with your speaking and compositions.
Ask the meaning if your come across any new expressions in your materials.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Long time ago, people would be seen the star and at the same time, they think about why is the star\'s shape different.
>> Long time ago, people would look at the stars and at the same time, they wondered why the star\'s shape was different.
I think that horoscopes are made from people\'s curiosity and to fear about uncertain future.
I think that horoscopes are made from people\'s curiosity and to fear about uncertain future.
>> I think that horoscopes are made from people\'s curiosity and the fear of an uncertain future.
When I feel nervous about being my situation, I also go to take horoscpes.
When I feel nervous about being my situation, I also go to take horoscpes.
>> I look at my horoscope whenever I feel nervous about a certain situation.
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