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Commonly, charming face or healthy body makes someone beautiful.
In addition, I think that professionalism makes someone beautiful.
Someone who has professionalism in his or her job can gain confidence.
And they can enjoy their job. So they can be happy
These(confidence and happiness) make them beautiful.
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Wow~ I definitely agree with your answer.
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- T. Rina
1. Commonly, charming face or healthy body makes someone beautiful.
>> Commonly, a charming face or a healthy body makes someone beautiful.
2. In addition, I think that professionalism makes someone beautiful.
>> CORRECT!
3. Someone who has professionalism in his or her job can gain confidence.
>> CORRECT!
>> Commonly, a charming face or a healthy body makes someone beautiful.
2. In addition, I think that professionalism makes someone beautiful.
>> CORRECT!
3. Someone who has professionalism in his or her job can gain confidence.
>> CORRECT!
4. And they can enjoy their job.
>> CORRECT!
5. So they can be happy
>> CORRECT!
6. These(confidence and happiness) make them beautiful.
>> CORRECT!
6. These(confidence and happiness) make them beautiful.
>> CORRECT!
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