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2020-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

-Why is studying English important for you?- (^-^) Beacause i will travel around the world with my mom~^^ If i travel around the world.. i will speak with people instead my mom~ So we will order delicious foods and buy clothes~ It is reason for me~^^

강사 첨삭

Hi Jenny! Thanks for the effort in doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here! Well done! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

Because I will travel around the world with my mom~^^

>>CORRECT
If I travel around the world.. I will speak with people instead my mom~

>>If I travel around the world, I will be speaking instead f my mom.
So we will order delicious foods and buy clothes~

>>CORRECT
It is reason for me~^^

>>This is the reason why English is important for me.

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