Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-If you could buy anything, what would you buy?- (^-^)
I want to buy dog and smartphone..
Beacause I love dog~~ It is very cute^^
And I haven\'t smartphone~
So i will buy them~~^^
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! Thanks for sharing your thoughts and spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Continue doing so because it\'s a good practice for you! ^ ^ I hope your desire to own a dog and have your smartphone will come true! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>I want to buy a dog and a smartphone.
Beacause I love dog.
Beacause I love dog.
>>I love dogs.
It is very cute^^
>>They are very cute.
>>They are very cute.
And I haven\'t smartphone~
>>And I have never had a cellphone.
>>And I have never had a cellphone.
So i will buy them~~^^
>>So I will buy them.
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