homework
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Q) Do you ever feel that you waste your free time?
A)
I tent to save time usually. but If I take a nap for a long time in holiday, I feel it\'s a waste of my time. and I feel guilty sometimes.
So I try to do something fun at home. like waching movies, reading books, cleaning the rooms,, and so on.
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I tent to save time usually. but If I take a nap for a long time in holiday
>> I tend to save time usually. Every time I take a long nap during the holidays, I feel like it\'s a waste of time and I feel guilty for it.
So I try to do something fun at home. like waching movies, reading books, cleaning the rooms,, and so on.
>> With that, I try to do something fun at home like watching movies, reading books, cleaning the rooms and so on.
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