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2020-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Sometimes, ____________________names can be confusing in _________________different languages. Much to___________the______confusion of many ________________English learners, ___________the______________ Europa is not the name of _________________continent, but rather __________________moon which orbits _______________Jupiter. And although many people have never heard of it, it is _______________especially important moon. Scientists have discovered that ________the________surface is entirely covered with _____________ice, but researchers hope that beneath __________________frozen layer lies ________the_________ocean. Nobody knows if _____the________center of the moon is frozen solid or if it is _________________liquid water.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Let\'s master the countable and uncountable nouns.
You just need a little bit of practice.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Sometimes, names can be confusing in different languages. 
>> Correct
Much to the confusion of many English learners, the Europa is not the name of continent, but rather moon which orbits Jupiter. 
>> Much to the confusion of many English learners, Europa is not a name of a continent, but rather a moon which orbits Jupiter. 
And although many people have never heard of it, it is especially important moon. 
>> And although many people have never heard of it, it is an especially important moon. 
Scientists have discovered that the surface is entirely covered with ice, but researchers hope that beneath frozen layer lies the ocean.
>> Scientists have discovered that the surface is entirely covered with ice, but researchers hope that beneath the frozen layer lies an ocean.
Nobody knows if the center of the moon is frozen solid or if it is liquid water.
>> Correct

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