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It is belly that I want to change my body part.
My belly has not muscle.
It is very complicated about a belly fat management.
I hope that my belly get a muscle, evenif I do not exercise.
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Hi [이름]!
I think everyone has this hope.
You have explained that really well.
I can\'t wait to read your future work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It is belly that I want to change my body part.
>> The part of my body that I want to change is my belly.
My belly has not muscle.
My belly has not muscle.
>> My belly is not very muscular.
It is very complicated about a belly fat management.
It is very complicated about a belly fat management.
>> It is very difficult to manage the fat around the belly.
I hope that my belly get a muscle, even if I do not exercise.
I hope that my belly get a muscle, even if I do not exercise.
>> I hope that the muscles in my belly develop even if I don\'t exercise.
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