homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What present would you want to receive this year? Why?
First, I received a game chip.
The name is Minecraft. Do you know about it?
I can create a world and live there.
Second, I receive a 3Dpen.I can make works of art and miniatures.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Paul! Good work for your homework today!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
First, I received a game chip.
>>CORRECT
OR>>First, I want to receive a game chip.
The name is Minecraft.
>>CORRECT
Do you know about it?
>>CORRECT
OR>>Do you know it?
OR>>Have you heard about it?
I can create a world and live there.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I can create a new word and live there.
Second, I receive a 3Dpen.
>>CORRECT
I can make works of art and miniatures.
>>CORRECT
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