HOMEWORK
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Q) What\'s the first thing you\'ll do after the pandamic?
If pandamin come to an end, I want to go to travel another country. especially popular vacation spot. like Hawaii. Bali. and so on.
and I want to go around without a mask. I miss those days.
I hope and I am sure that COVID 19 will come to an end if we work togther. We can win.
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>> If the pandemic comes to an end, I want to travel to another country.
(Be careful when in comes to the spelling and observe the correct usage of punctuation marks :) )
especially popular vacation spot. like Hawaii. Bali. and so on.
>> Especially on popular vacation spots like Hawaii, Bali and so on.
( Be careful when it comes to capitalizations of letters as well as the correct usage of punctuation marks. ^^ )
and I want to go around without a mask. I miss those days.
>> I would also like to go around without using a mask. I miss those days.
( Be careful when it comes to capitalizations of letters as well as the correct usage of punctuation marks. ^^ )
I hope and I am sure that COVID 19 will come to an end if we work togther. We can win.
>> I hope and I\'m sure that COVID-19 will come to an end if we work together. We can win against it.
(Be careful when in comes to the spelling and observe the correct usage of punctuation marks :) )
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