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The most memorable thing was that I went to the basketball game. I was very excited because one of a basketball player said hello to me!! I was too happy that time.
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The most memorable thing was that I went to the basketball game.
>> The most memorable thing for me was when I went to a basketball game.
I was very excited because one of a basketball player said hello to me!! I was too happy that time.
>> I was very excited because one of a basketball players said hello to me!! I was so happy that time.
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