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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
If you had to be handcuffed to one person for an entire month, who would It be?
I don\'t want to make anyone be handcuffed because it doesn\'t help anything. I wouldn\'t do it but if I must do it then I will handcuff some thieves around the world. They should know that hands are not the tool to steal something. Hands are a very useful tool for the human being. They can make things which make life comfortable with their hands. Also, they can help some poor with their hands. There are lots of valuable behaviors that they can do with their hands.
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Hi [이름]!
I also agree.
Thank you for answering!
I don\'t want to make anyone be handcuffed because it doesn\'t help anything.
>>CORRECT
I wouldn\'t do it but if I must do it then I will handcuff some thieves around the world.
>>CORRECT
They should know that hands are not the tool to steal something.
>>CORRECT
Hands are a very useful tool for the human being.
>>Hands are a very useful tool for human beings.
They can make things which make life comfortable with their hands.
>>CORRECT
Also, they can help some poor with their hands.
>>CORRECT
There are lots of valuable behaviors that they can do with their hands.
>>CORRECT
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