homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
You are the only person left in the world. Everything was abandoned and everyone suddenly disappeared. What will you do?
First, I will learn how to plant crops because food is the most important factor to keep my life. Second, I will also learn how to raise livestock. There will be lots of resources around the city so keeping my life won\'t be that hard. However, I cannot live alone in my whole life. I will try to find another survived person and I will make a companion dog.
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First, I will learn how to plant crops because food is the most important factor to keep my life.
>>CORRECT
Second, I will also learn how to raise livestock.
>>CORRECT
There will be lots of resources around the city so keeping my life won\'t be that hard.
>>CORRECT
However, I cannot live alone in my whole life.
>>CORRECT
I will try to find another survived person and I will make a companion dog.
>>I will try to find another survivor and I will have a dog as a companion.
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