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2020-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

What changes would you like to happen in your country?- (^-^) I want to change the sky Beacase sky\'s color is not pretty... But sometimes I feel the sky is very beautiful today~!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Jenny! Thanks for sharing! I really appreciate your effort and for doing your homework. Keep it up! ^ ^

Maybe Korea\'s sky is sometimes dark and gloomy because of the fine dust. I hope your government will really try hard to do something about it so you will enjoy fresh air and clear blue sky! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I want to change the sky.

>>CORRECT
Beacase sky\'s color is not pretty...

>>Because the sky\'s color is not so pretty.
But sometimes I feel the sky is very beautiful today~!!

>>But there are days when the sky looks very beautiful.

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