homework.
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Q) What moments in the past would you like to change and why?
A)
If I could go back to the past, I want to go back to my 20s.
my mom died when I was 32. It was regrettable that I could not make more memories.
So back in my twenties, I want to travel around the world and to eat delicious food with mom.
And share the lots of feeling and memories.
I really miss her.
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If I could go back to the past, I want to go back to my 20s.
>>CORRECT
my mom died when I was 32. It was regrettable that I could not make more memories.
>> My mom died when I was 32 yrs old. It was regrettable that I could not make more memories with her.
So back in my twenties, I want to travel around the world and to eat delicious food with mom.
>> So if I\'ll be in my 20s again, I would travel around the world and eat delicious food with her.
And share the lots of feeling and memories.
> >I want to share lots of feelings and memories with her.
I really miss her.
>>CORRECT
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