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2020-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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I think my favorite character will be a zhang gu. He is kind of a character who is in animation and comic books. He is very mischievous person. He has 4 friendly friends. He likes crackers and his cousin sister.

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I think my favorite character will be a zhang gu. 
>> I think my favorite character is Zhang Gu. 

He is kind of a character who is in animation and comic books.
>> Correct.

 He is very mischievous person.
>>  He is a very mischievous person.

 He has 4 friendly friends.
>> Correct.

 He likes crackers and his cousin sister
>>  He likes crackers and his female cousin.

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