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2012-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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ugly-uglier-ugliest/keen-keener-keenest/happy-happier-happiest/tall-taller-tallest/good-better-best When did you talk last your mother?/I played last computer two days ago./He wasn't at the meeting on Monday because he was sick./Where does she go for her vacation?/How long it takes you to drive from Seoul to Busan? Today I went to the post office for sending a package include snacks, vitamin, and sincere letter to my friend who had argument with me. I explained the reason of taking back my words in the letter. I also expressed how I felt sorry. the package will be arrived his home tomorrow. On my way home, I received letter written before I canceled promise from my friend. The main contents of the letter is his expectation like how happy he was. I felt guilty for him more than before. But I'm okay because if he receives my package, he will forgive my fault and understand me. It is good news for me! He called me while I write this composition even though he didn't receive my package

강사 첨삭

Hello Isabel!  Here are my corrections! Please check it out. I am really happy for you because you are okay now. -Teacher Chloe   ugly-uglier-ugliest >>Correct keen-keener-keenest >>Correct happy-happier-happiest >>Correct tall-taller-tallest >>Correct good-better-best>>Correct   When did you talk last your mother? >>When was the last time you saw your mother? I played last computer two days ago. >>I last played computer 2 days ago. He wasn\'t at the meeting on Monday because he was sick.>>Correct Where does she go for her vacation? >>Where did she go for her vacation? How long it takes you to drive from Seoul to Busan? >>How long did it take you to drive from Seoul to Busan? Today I went to the post office for sending a package include snacks, vitamin, and sincere letter to my friend who had argument with me. >>I went to the post office today to send a package of snacks and vitamins and a letter for a friend whom I had an argument. I explained the reason of taking back my words in the letter. >>In the letter, I explained to her my side and I apologized. I also expressed how I felt sorry. >>I expressed my sincerest sorry. the package will be arrived his home tomorrow. >>My friend will be receiving the package tomorrow. On my way home, I received letter written before I canceled promise from my friend. >>When I was on my home, I received a letter from my friend which is written before I cancelled my promise to him. The main contents of the letter is his expectation like how happy he was. >>On his letter, he told me about his expectations. I felt guilty for him more than before. >>I really felt guilty.  But I\'m okay because if he receives my package, he will forgive my fault and understand me. >>But I'm okay now because I know that he will forgive me and understand me once he will receive my package for him. It is good news for me! He called me while I write this composition even though he didn\'t receive my package >>It is a good news for me! He called me while I was writing the letter for him.  

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