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2020-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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1. Germans love to take beach holidays in countries like ______________Maldives, ____________Bahamas and_________________Dominican Republic. I think that\'s because those countries are so much warmer than Germany. 2. When we visited ________the______England, we spent five days in ____________London and then we drove up to________________Scotland. 3. I can\'t wait until we visit ________the_________United Arab Emirates. Did you know the tallest building in the world is in ________________Dubai? 4. Our cruise makes stops in __________________Netherlands, ________________Belgium, _________the_____United Kingdom and _____________France. It\'s going to be amazing! 5. In _______the_______U.S., there are many immigrants from _________________Mexico, _______________Vietnam, ________________Philippines and ________________Ethiopia.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Please pay attention to the names of the countries.
Some tricks were give to you to help you remember.
Apply and take advantage of them.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
1. Germans love to take beach holidays in countries like Maldives, Bahamas and Dominican Republic. I think that\'s because those countries are so much warmer than
Germany.
>> Germans love to take beach holidays in countries like the Maldives, the Bahamas and the Dominican Republic. I think that\'s because those countries are so much warmer than
Germany.
2. When we visited the England, we spent five days in London and then we drove up to Scotland.
>> When we visited England, we spent five days in London and then we drove up to Scotland.
3. I can\'t wait until we visit the United Arab Emirates. Did you know the tallest building in the world is in Dubai?
>> Correct
4. Our cruise makes stops in Netherlands, Belgium, the United Kingdom and France. It\'s going to be amazing!
>> Our cruise makes stops in the Netherlands, Belgium, the United Kingdom and France. It\'s going to be amazing!
5. In the U.S., there are many immigrants from Mexico, Vietnam, Philippines and Ethiopia.
>>  In the U.S., there are many immigrants from Mexico, Vietnam, the Philippines and Ethiopia.

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