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2020-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

Who do you admire the most and why?- (^-^) I admire Yoo Guan Soon most. Beacause she was very brave!! I want to become braver like her~~^^

Hi Jenny! Thanks for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here but I hope you could have tlaked more about Yoo Guan Soon; like who is she and why is she brave? ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I admire Yoo Guan Soon most.

>>I admire Yoo Guan Soon the most.
Because she was very brave!!

>>CORRECT
I want to become braver like her~~

>>I want to become brave or as brave as her.

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