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I don’t think I really have my bucket list but I’ll think about what do I obey. First, I can’t do bad things to friends. (EX: bullying) I don’t really bully but I can’t bully people. Second, do not say bad things to people. Third, do not eat a lot(?) (I don’t really know the third one.)
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I don’t think I really have my bucket list but I’ll think about what do I obey.
>> I don’t think I really have my bucket list but I’ll think about what I want to do.
First, I can’t do bad things to friends. (EX: bullying)
>> First, I can’t do bad things to my friends. (EX: bullying)
I don’t really bully but I can’t bully people.
>> I don’t really bully anyone but I also can’t bully people.
Second, do not say bad things to people.
>> Correct.
Third, do not eat a lot(?) (I don’t really know the third one.)
>> Third, do not eat a lot. (I don’t really know the third one.)
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