homework
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Q) What do you usually do when you have troubles falling asleep?
A) When I can\'t fall asleep, I take a shower with warm water.
And I drink a decaf tea.
I dim the lights in the house and stay away from smartphones.
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>> CORRECT
And I drink a decaf tea.
>> I also drink some decaf tea.
I dim the lights in the house and stay away from smartphones.
>>Lastly, I dim the light in the house and stay away from using smartphones.
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