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2020-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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1. I didn\'t know that ___________________Lake Michigan was one of ________the__________Great Lakes until we went there last year. 2. We stayed at _______the____________Plaza, a world famous hotel near _______________Central Park. 3. I always enjoy driving over ___________the_______Golden Gate Bridge. It has a lovely view over ________________San Francisco and _______the__________Pacific. 4. While we were in _________________Georgia, we went canoeing in _______________Okefenokee Swamp and camped along __________________Suwannee River. 5. On her first day in Paris, Cindy visited __________the_________Notre Dame Cathedral and ________the__________Eiffel Tower.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
It has been fun discussing this with you.
It\'s good to talk about these great places.
Till the next one!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
1. I didn\'t know that Lake Michigan was one of the Great Lakes until we went there last year.
>> Correct
2. We stayed at the Plaza, a world famous hotel near Central Park.
>> Correct
3. I always enjoy driving over the Golden Gate Bridge. It has a lovely view over San Francisco and the Pacific.
>> Correct
4. While we were in Georgia, we went canoeing in Okefenokee Swamp and camped along Suwannee River.
>> While we were in Georgia, we went canoeing in the Okefenokee Swamp and camped along the Suwannee River.
5. On her first day in Paris, Cindy visited the Notre Dame Cathedral and the Eiffel Tower.
>> On her first day in Paris, Cindy visited Notre Dame Cathedral and the Eiffel Tower.

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