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2020-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Although she hates museums, on her second day in Paris, Cindy visited ___________Louvre to see ___the_____Mona Lisa, the most famous painting in the world. 2. A: Have you ever heard of ___________Malta? B: Yes, it\'s an island in _______the_______Mediterranean. 3. When we went hiking in __________Alps, we saw many famous mountains including __________Matterhorn and__________________Mont Blanc. 4. When Stan attended _______the________Harvard University, he lived in a small, off-campus apartment on ___________Newbury Street.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
We have finished a rule again.
Let\'s get hyped for the next one.
You are doing great in these exercises.
Just keep the spirit.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
1. Although she hates museums, on her second day in Paris, Cindy visited Louvre to see the Mona Lisa, the most famous painting in the world.
>> Although she hates museums, on her second day in Paris, Cindy visited the Louvre to see the Mona Lisa, the most famous painting in the world.
2. A: Have you ever heard of Malta?
>> Correct
B: Yes, it\'s an island in the Mediterranean.
>> Correct
3. When we went hiking in Alps, we saw many famous mountains including Matterhorn and Mont Blanc.
>> When we went hiking in the Alps, we saw many famous mountains including the Matterhorn and Mont Blanc.
4. When Stan attended the Harvard University, he lived in a small, off-campus apartment on Newbury Street.
>> When Stan attended Harvard University, he lived in a small, off-campus apartment on Newbury Street.

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