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I think that there is three ways to reduce pollution.
Fitst, we must save resources like water, electronic.
Second, we must reduce to use disposable products.
Instead of using disposable products, we can use a tumbler, a handkerchief, and so on
Third, we must seperate well recyclable materials
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- T. Rina
1. I think that there is three ways to reduce pollution.
>> I think that there are three ways to reduce pollution.
2. Fitst, we must save resources like water, electronic.
>> First, we must save resources like water and electricity.
3. Second, we must reduce to use disposable products.
>> I think that there are three ways to reduce pollution.
2. Fitst, we must save resources like water, electronic.
>> First, we must save resources like water and electricity.
3. Second, we must reduce to use disposable products.
>> CORRECT!
4. Instead of using disposable products, we can use a tumbler, a handkerchief, and so on
>> CORRECT!
5. Third, we must seperate well recyclable materials
>> Third, we must separate recyclable materials well.
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