homework
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What are you mostly optimistic/pessimistic about?
I mostly optimistic about live in America first. Everything feels a new. and I\'d like to study English hard, because I want to live here comfortably.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your effort in answering your homework. Here are my corrections for you. :) I hope you will be an optimistic person even in the long run.
-Teacher Elise
I mostly optimistic about live in America first.
>> I\'m mostly optimistic about living in America.
Everything feels a new.
>> Everything feels new.
and I\'d like to study English hard, because I want to live here comfortably.
>> That\'s why I want to study English very hard. It\'s because I want to live here comfortably.
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