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Unemployment is a great problem in korea too.
Because of bad economy job is decreasing,
But students who graduated a universiy is increasing eyery year.
And the number of job for older people is small too.
In addition, Because of corona virus job is decreaing more, so our goverment announce policy to economic stimulus.
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1. Unemployment is a great problem in Korea too.
>> CORRECT!
2. Because of bad economy job is decreasing,
>> CORRECT!
2. Because of bad economy job is decreasing,
>> Because of bad economy, jobs are decreasing.
3. But students who graduated a universiy is increasing eyery year.
>> But students who graduate in universities are increasing every year.
4. And the number of job for older people is small too.
>> And the number of jobs for older people is small too.
5. In addition, Because of corona virus job is decreaing more, so our goverment announce policy to economic stimulus.
>> In addition, because of Corona virus, jobs are decreasing more, so our government announced a new policy to stimulate the economy.
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