Homework
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it is different everymoment.wheather i believe the media or not.
There are lots of lie news these days.
We should check about the news that is true or not.
But it is hard.and we have to make us are able to find the true from the news.
If we were able to find it,we will be funny when we contact the media.
Anyway there are lots of problems in korea.
I hope will be switched from this president to the other side soon.
I am waiting the next vote day.the day is after 1year and 6 months.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!^^
Thank you for practicing again by doing your homework.
Keep it up~
Always,
~Kelly^^
it is different everymoment.wheather i believe the media or not.>> It\'s different every time. There are times when I don\'t believe the media.
There are lots of lie news these days.
>> There are a lot of fake news these days.
We should check about the news that is true or not.
We should check about the news that is true or not.
>> We should check first if the news is true or not.
But it is hard.
>> Correct.
and we have to make us are able to find the true from the news.
>> And we have to find out the real story.
If we were able to find it,we will be funny when we contact the media.
If we were able to find it,we will be funny when we contact the media.
>> If we were able to find it, it would be fun and we can contact the media and share it.
Anyway there are lots of problems in korea.
Anyway there are lots of problems in korea.
>> Anyway, there are lots of problems in Korea.
I hope will be switched from this president to the other side soon.
I hope will be switched from this president to the other side soon.
>> I hope we will have a new President soon.
I am waiting the next vote day.the day is after 1year and 6 months.
I am waiting the next vote day.the day is after 1year and 6 months.
>> I am waiting for the next election day. It is after one (1) year and six (6) months.
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