Homework
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Please note _____the_______daily excursion to ___________Mt. Kapuhu is highly recommended; _____a_____view from the top of ________the____volcano is breathtaking. We also suggest _____to________visit to _______________Nualani Beach or ________________Kihaha Canyon, two of ________the_______most popular attractions in _______________Sahini Archipelago.
And for _____________scuba divers, we would like to direct your attention to _________a_____resort\'s dive center, ______a_______five-star facility and ______the_________best way to explore ______________Pihuahani Reef just offshore.
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Please note the daily excursion to Mt. Kapuhu is highly recommended; a view from the top of the volcano is breathtaking.
>> Please note the daily excursion to Mt. Kapuhu is highly recommended; the view from the top of the volcano is breathtaking.
We also suggest to visit to Nualani Beach or Kihaha Canyon, two of the most popular attractions in Sahini Archipelago.
>> We also suggest a visit to Nualani Beach or Kihaha Canyon, two of the most popular attractions in Sahini Archipelago.
And for scuba divers, we would like to direct your attention to a resort\'s dive center, a five-star facility and the best way to explore Pihuahani Reef just offshore.
>> And for scuba divers, we would like to direct your attention to the resort\'s dive center, a five-star facility and the best way to explore Pihuahani Reef just offshore.
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