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2020-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elica

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If I should tell the only truth, I would encounter many embarrassing situations. Of course, lies are not good. However, there are white and social lies. Sometimes I imagine what it would be like to be able to hear what people are thinking because I sometimes wonder what they think. But sometimes it must hurt my heart. Everybody has their own secrets and tells a lie not to hurt others. It is a kind of thoughtful thing. So if I tell the truth to ohers, I would live alone forever.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Yes, it\'s possible to be in an embarrassing situation when we tell the truth but it could also be freeing. I also agree that it can hurt us or the person it\'s pertaining to, yet it can also be helpful in a way. As they say, \"Truth hurts\", right? I guess that\'s why telling the truths is always going to be a challenge for anyone. See you later!
~Elica~
That If I should tell the only truth, I would encounter many embarrassing situations.
>>CORRECT
Of course, lies are not good.
>>CORRECT
However, there are white and social lies.
>>CORRECT
Sometimes I imagine what it would be like to be able to hear what people are thinking because I sometimes wonder what they think.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>Sometimes I imagine what it would be like to hear what people are thinking because I sometimes I wonder about it.
But sometimes it must hurt my heart.
>>CORRECT
Everybody has their own secrets and tells a lie not to hurt others.
>>Everybody has their own secrets and tells a lie to not hurt others.
It is a kind of thoughtful thing.
>>It\'s kind of thoughtful.
So if I tell the truth to ohers, I would live alone forever.
>>So if I tell the truth to others, I would live forever.

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