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2020-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What\'s the hardest thing you\'ve done when you were still in school? When I was in school, the hardest thing is study hard, I have many class and after school. so It is very tired every day.

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When I was in school, the hardest thing is study hard, I have many class and after school. so It is very tired every day.
>> When I was still in school, the hardest part was studying. I had many classes even after school hours which made me exhausted all the time. 

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