homework
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Q) What can you do to make the world a better place?
A) I think the best way for sace the world is reducing waste especially plastics and chemical pollitions.
We have to try harder to protect ecosystem.
It\'s the most important for people to recognize that climate changes are serious.
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>> I think the best way to save the world is reducing waste especially plastics and chemical pollutions.
We have to try harder to protect ecosystem.
>>CORRECT
It\'s the most important for people to recognize that climate changes are serious.
>> It is important for people to recognize that climate change is very serious.
>> It is important for people to recognize that climate change is very serious.
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