Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, ___the___email is___________far more common way to communicate with __________friends and
family. It\'s also _________faster and cheaper way to communicate. When I send ____an_____email to ___a______friend in _____a____distant country, ____the_____friend will receive _____the____email almost immediately. What\'s more, I have the ability to attach _______a____photograph, _____a_______video, or _____a______MP3. And I don\'t even have to buy______an_______expensive stamp.
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Today, the email is far more common way to communicate with friends and family.
>> Today, email is a far more common way to communicate with friends and family.
It\'s also faster and cheaper way to communicate.
>> It\'s also a faster and cheaper way to communicate.
When I send an email to a friend in a distant country, the friend will receive the email almost immediately.
>> Correct
What\'s more, I have the ability to attach a photograph, a video, or a MP3.
>> What\'s more, I have the ability to attach a photograph, a video, or an MP3.
And I don\'t even have to buy an expensive stamp.
>> Correct
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