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2020-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Q) What are the things that you regret in life? A) I usually try no to regret. But If you choose on thing that i regert, I regret I didn\'t spend a lot of time with mom. and also, I didn\'t say more \'I love you\'. If i had mor time with mom, I could have made memories a lot.

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I usually try no to regret.
>> I usually try to not regret anything. 

But If you choose on thing that i regert, I regret I didn\'t spend a lot of time with mom.
>> But I have to choose, the thing I regret most is not spending a lot of time with my mom and not telling her how much I love her. 

and also, I didn\'t say more \'I love you\'.
>> CONNECT THIS WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

If i had mor time with mom, I could have made memories a lot.
>> If only I had more time with my mom, I could have made a lot of memories with her. 

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