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2020-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

학생이 쓴 원문

it is 12 a.m I will eat lunch and read books and do my chors. But at 12 a.m I eat lunch.at 1 p.m I do my chors and read books. today I will go shopping with my mom we will buy some food for tomorrows lunch and tink about It.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ruby!
This is an interesting schedule. I want to have my lunch for an hour too, but I cannot do it because I have to rush eating my lunch most of the time.  ^ ^
-Rachel 
it is 12 a.m I will eat lunch and read books and do my chors.
>> It is 12 P.M, I will eat lunch, read books and do my chores. 
But at 12 a.m I eat lunch.at 1 p.m I do my chors and read books.
>> I will eat lunch for an hour, do my chores and read my books.
today I will go shopping with my mom we will buy some food for tomorrows lunch and tink about It.
>> Today I will go shopping with my mom to buy some foods for tomorrow\'s lunch, but we have to think about It.

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