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I will write about a story named a red riding hood and the little red hen story .
the title is the red story.
becuse
the red riding hood story has a red hood and the little red hen story has a red hen.
and why I am putting a comic book easy story is every one can read the comic book.
thank you🙂
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Hello Ruby!
I think the story is interesting. I would love to read the comic book you will write. ^ ^
-Rachel
I will write about a story named a red riding hood and the little red hen story .
>> I will write about a story called, Red Riding Hood and the Little Red Hen\".
the title is the red story.
the title is the red story.
>> The title is about the story of the color red.
becuse the red riding hood story has a red hood and the little red hen story has a red hen.
becuse the red riding hood story has a red hood and the little red hen story has a red hen.
>> Because the Red Riding Hood has a red hood and the little red hen has is all red.
and why I am putting a comic book easy story is every one can read the comic book.
and why I am putting a comic book easy story is every one can read the comic book.
>> And why am I putting an easy story in a comic book? Because every one read a comic book.
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