HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think of the tradition of giving Christmas cards? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
-> I think tradition of giving Christmas cards is nice tradition.
Because if we give Christmas cards, we can tell our mind.
Also we can recognize other person\'s mind.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. It was nice reading your homework. I appreciate the time you spent to make it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the topic. Yes, giving Christmas cards is a way for us to show how much we care about other people. Enjoy your evening. See you in class tomorrow. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I think tradition of giving Christmas cards is nice tradition.
>> I think the tradition of giving Christmas cards is a nice tradition.
Because if we give Christmas cards, we can tell our mind.
>> Because when we give Christmas cards we can express our thoughts.
Also we can recognize other person\'s mind.
>> Also, we can know other people\'s thoughts.
I think tradition of giving Christmas cards is nice tradition.
>> I think the tradition of giving Christmas cards is a nice tradition.
Because if we give Christmas cards, we can tell our mind.
>> Because when we give Christmas cards we can express our thoughts.
Also we can recognize other person\'s mind.
>> Also, we can know other people\'s thoughts.
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