HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could have a different number of siblings, what would it be? Disscus in 3 to 5 sentences.
-> If I could get a different number of siblings, I want to get 2 siblings (Including my brother).
Because if my siblings are many, I can play boardgame with many people.
And I can play computer game with my brother or sister.
강사 첨삭
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If I could get a different number of siblings, I want to get 2 siblings (Including my brother).
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: If I could get a different number of siblings, I want to have two siblings, including my brother.
Because if my siblings are many, I can play boardgame with many people.
>> Because if I have more siblings, I can play board games with them.
And I can play computer game with my brother or sister.
>> And I can play computer games with my brothers or sisters.
If I could get a different number of siblings, I want to get 2 siblings (Including my brother).
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: If I could get a different number of siblings, I want to have two siblings, including my brother.
Because if my siblings are many, I can play boardgame with many people.
>> Because if I have more siblings, I can play board games with them.
And I can play computer game with my brother or sister.
>> And I can play computer games with my brothers or sisters.
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