Homework
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I wold like to write christmas storys and spashal things and I wold like it colorfull and pritty .
and some good and bad news to and somethings like big thing things and bad things ,storys,famillys.
it will be very fun I hope it will be very fun and the readers will like it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby!
Thank you for this homework. I think it would indeed be fun to read the newspaper articles you wrote especially when you add funny stories. ^ ^
-Rachel
I wold like to write christmas storys and spashal things and I wold like it colorfull and pritty .
>> I would like to write Christmas stories and special things and I would like to color it prettily.
and some good and bad news to and somethings like big thing things and bad things ,storys,famillys.
>> Then I will add some bad and good new and things like family stories.
it will be very fun I hope it will be very fun and the readers will like it.
it will be very fun I hope it will be very fun and the readers will like it.
>> It will be very fun, and I think the readers would like it.
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