homework

2020-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

-How do you think will you improve your English skills more?- (^-^) I think .. I am improving my English skill~!! So I am very happy~^^ Beacause I will travel all arond the world with my mom!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Jenny! ^ ^ Thanks for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it!

I think you missed the question. It asked \"HOW\". Which means you have to mention the things you still need to do to improve your skills, like, reading English books, listening to English music et. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I think ..
I am improving my English skill~!!

>>I think I am improving my skills in English.
So I am very happy~^^

>>CORRECT
Beacause I will travel all arond the world with my mom!!

>>Because I will travel around the world with my mom!

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