HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
-> I want to rap or listen to a rap or I want to memorize a rap.
Because I like rap, and I like to rap.
I like to listen to rap and I like to memorize a rap
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Wow! You really like rap music. :) I hope you do get your extra hours so you could practice your rap skills. And maybe, I could hear you rap one day. I hope you have a good night. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I want to rap or listen to a rap or I want to memorize a rap.
>> I want to rap or listen to rap and I want to memorize a rap song.
Because I like rap, and I like to rap.
>> Because I like rap music and I like to rap.
I like to listen to rap and I like to memorize a rap
>> So if I had a few extra hours in a day I would listen to a rap song and memorize it.
I want to rap or listen to a rap or I want to memorize a rap.
>> I want to rap or listen to rap and I want to memorize a rap song.
Because I like rap, and I like to rap.
>> Because I like rap music and I like to rap.
I like to listen to rap and I like to memorize a rap
>> So if I had a few extra hours in a day I would listen to a rap song and memorize it.
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