homework
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Essay: Do you have any similar holidays like this? What is the biggest religion in your country? Is religion important to you or not?
My country have two holidays, It\'s a Christmas and Budda\'s Birthday.
My religion is Budda, So I celebrate Budda\'s Birthday,
I\'m not a christian,but every year Christmas is very happy.
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Essay: Do you have any similar holidays like this? What is the biggest religion in your country? Is religion important to you or not?
My country have two holidays, It\'s a Christmas and Budda\'s Birthday.
>>> My country has two holidays, Christmas and Buddha\'s birthday.
My religion is Budda, So I celebrate Budda\'s Birthday,
>>> My religion is Buddhism so I celebrate Buddha\'s birthday.
I\'m not a christian,but every year Christmas is very happy.
>>> I\'m not a Christian but every year Christmas makes us happy.
My country have two holidays, It\'s a Christmas and Budda\'s Birthday.
>>> My country has two holidays, Christmas and Buddha\'s birthday.
My religion is Budda, So I celebrate Budda\'s Birthday,
>>> My religion is Buddhism so I celebrate Buddha\'s birthday.
I\'m not a christian,but every year Christmas is very happy.
>>> I\'m not a Christian but every year Christmas makes us happy.
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