HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your taste in music? Has it changed in time? Would you recommend it to someone? Discuss 3 to 5 sentences.
-> My taste in music is hiphop.
My taste in music was balad, but it changed to hiphop.
I would recommend someone a hiphop.
Because a beat of hiphop is very good and amazing.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. It seems your taste in music got better over the years. ^^ Anyway, thank you for doing your homework. Another job well done. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on your taste in music. Have a lovely evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
My taste in music is hiphop.
>> CORRECT =)
My taste in music was balad, but it changed to hiphop.
>> My taste in music was a ballad but it changed to hip-hop (over the years).
I would recommend someone a hiphop.
>> I would recommend hip-hop to someone.
Because a beat of hiphop is very good and amazing.
>> Because hip-hop beat is very good and amazing.
My taste in music is hiphop.
>> CORRECT =)
My taste in music was balad, but it changed to hiphop.
>> My taste in music was a ballad but it changed to hip-hop (over the years).
I would recommend someone a hiphop.
>> I would recommend hip-hop to someone.
Because a beat of hiphop is very good and amazing.
>> Because hip-hop beat is very good and amazing.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.