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Hello!^^
If I am [Name] Milan and I draw dream like paintings. I will Draw an horse with wings and a horn. And it is flying in space with some people on. And other animals too. Then I will sell it and give the paintings. And with the money I will help the people in need then I will have some of the money too.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby!
Wow, the horse that I imagine in your drawing is like a unicorn. I wish I could draw too because I have many things that I want to draw. ^ ^
-Rachel
If I am [Name] Milan and I draw dream like paintings. I will Draw an horse with wings and a horn.
>> If I were Dimitra Milan and I draw dream like painting, I would draw a horse with wings and a horn on it\'s head.
And it is flying in space with some people on.
>> The horse would look like it is flying in space with some people on it.
And other animals too.
>> I would paint some animals too.
Then I will sell it and give the paintings.
>> Then I will sell it or give the paintings away.
And with the money I will help the people in need then I will have some of the money too.
>> correct
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