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I think relaxing is very important because it destroy the stressed things. When we don\'t have things that we can get relaxed, we will be stressed a lot. All the people need relax.
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I think relaxing is very important because it destroy the stressed things.
>> I think relaxing is very important because it relieves stress in life.
When we don\'t have things that we can get relaxed, we will be stressed a lot.
>> When we don\'t have things that we can get relaxed, we will be stressed a lot.
All the people need relax.
>> All people need to relax.
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