homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-Would you rather meet your favorite celebrity or visit your favorite country?- (^-^)
I will meet my favorite celebrity.
Beacause going another country is easy..
But seeing my favorite celebrity is so difficult~~!
So I will meet with my favorite celebrity!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! Thanks for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it~
I think you have made a very good point with your homework. Travelling is easy but meeting your favorite celebrity is difficult! ^ ^ Great!
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT OR
>>I would rather meet my favorite celebrity than visit my favorite country.
Beacause going another country is easy..
Beacause going another country is easy..
>>Because going to another country is easy.
But seeing my favorite celebrity is so difficult~~!
But seeing my favorite celebrity is so difficult~~!
>>But being able to meet my favorite celebrity is a challenge!
So I will meet with my favorite celebrity!!
So I will meet with my favorite celebrity!!
>>So I will meet my favorite celebrity.
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