Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
(Essay) Do you enjoy live music? Have you been to any concerts?
Yes. I do.
I enjoy live music.
I went to concerts. Korean singer \'Lee so-ra\'. she has a voice very fantastic.
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Yes. I do.
>>CORRECT!
I enjoy live music.
I enjoy live music.
>>CORRECT!
I went to concerts. Korean singer \'Lee so-ra\'. she has a voice very fantastic.
I went to concerts. Korean singer \'Lee so-ra\'. she has a voice very fantastic.
>>I have been to concerts. One of the is the concert of Korean singer \'Lee so-ra\'. She has a very fantastic voice.
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