HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Which part of your city do you like best? Why? Discuss 3 to 5 sentences.
-> I like my town which is a part of my city.
Because in my town, there is my home.
And I can play with my friends in my town.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Your town must be lovely since you enjoy it there and you never want to leave.^^ Thank you for sharing about your town. Maybe, we can talk more about it in class if we get the chance. I appreciate you doing your homework. Have a nice evening. See you tomorrow in class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I like my town which is a part of my city.
>> CORRECT =)
Because in my town, there is my home.
>> Because my home is in my town.
And I can play with my friends in my town.
>> CORRECT =)
I like my town which is a part of my city.
>> CORRECT =)
Because in my town, there is my home.
>> Because my home is in my town.
And I can play with my friends in my town.
>> CORRECT =)
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