HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think it is necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements? Discuss 3 to 5 sentences.
-> I think it isn\'t necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
Because healthy people are healthy right now, but they could be unhealthy in future.
And someone may have to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements to live.
So I think it isn\'t necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. And for sharing your thoughts on the subject. Maybe we can talk more about it in one of our classes. Have a good one. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I think it isn\'t necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
>> I think it is not necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
Because healthy people are healthy right now, but they could be unhealthy in future.
>> Because healthy people are healthy right now but they could be unhealthy in the future.
And someone may have to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements to live.
>> CORRECT =)
So I think it isn\'t necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
>> So I think it is not necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
I think it isn\'t necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
>> I think it is not necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
Because healthy people are healthy right now, but they could be unhealthy in future.
>> Because healthy people are healthy right now but they could be unhealthy in the future.
And someone may have to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements to live.
>> CORRECT =)
So I think it isn\'t necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
>> So I think it is not necessary for healthy people to take additional vitamins or mineral supplements.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.