HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think was your best decision this year? Discuss 3 to 5 sentences.
-> I think my best decision this year was not going to outside often.
Because if we go to outside this year, we might get Corona Virus Disease 19.
And if we go to outside in winter, we might get cold.
I think we have to be careful about Covid 19, and cold.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. Thank you for exerting more effort into your homework these days. Progress is very important and it is part of learning. I am glad I see that in your writing. Keep it up. Happy New Year. I\'ll see you next year. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I think my best decision this year was not going to outside often.
>> I think my best decision this year was not going outside often.
Because if we go to outside this year, we might get Corona Virus Disease 19.
>> This year, if we go outside, we might get Corona Virus Disease 19.
And if we go to outside in winter, we might get cold.
>> And if we go outside in winter, we might get cold.
I think we have to be careful about Covid 19, and cold.
>> I think we have to be careful about Covid 19 and getting cold.
I think my best decision this year was not going to outside often.
>> I think my best decision this year was not going outside often.
Because if we go to outside this year, we might get Corona Virus Disease 19.
>> This year, if we go outside, we might get Corona Virus Disease 19.
And if we go to outside in winter, we might get cold.
>> And if we go outside in winter, we might get cold.
I think we have to be careful about Covid 19, and cold.
>> I think we have to be careful about Covid 19 and getting cold.
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