HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Is there any special treat that you are planning to give yourself next year? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
-> I\'ll give a love ( special treat ) to myself next year.
Because if I love myself, I can feel a great feeling.
And if I love myself, I can love people who are around me.
So I\'ll give a love to myself next year.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. That is a wonderful gift one can give themselves. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and your bright ideas on the homework topics. I hope you have a love-filled year this year. Cheers! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I\'ll give a love ( special treat ) to myself next year.
>> I will give love as a special treat to myself next year.
Because if I love myself, I can feel a great feeling.
>> CORRECT =)
And if I love myself, I can love people who are around me.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: And if I love myself, I can love people around me.
So I\'ll give a love to myself next year.
>> So I will give love to myself next year.
I\'ll give a love ( special treat ) to myself next year.
>> I will give love as a special treat to myself next year.
Because if I love myself, I can feel a great feeling.
>> CORRECT =)
And if I love myself, I can love people who are around me.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: And if I love myself, I can love people around me.
So I\'ll give a love to myself next year.
>> So I will give love to myself next year.
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